San Jos� State University 
Department of English and Comparative Literature 
English 1B, Composition 2 (GE C3), Section 20, Fall 2011 

Instructor: Peter Gambrill 
Office Location: Faculty Offices 213 
Telephone: (408) (924-4490) 
Email: am.project@gmail.com 
Office Hours: TuTh 12:00-1:00PM (or by appointment) 
Class Days/Time: TuTh 10:30-11:45AM 
Classroom: BBC 205 
Prerequisites: English 1A (or demonstrated equivalency) 
GE Category: Written Communication C3 

Course Description 

The distinctive characteristic of English 1B, the second step in meeting the requirements for 
writing instruction at SJSU, is a focus on argumentation: picking one side of a debate, defending 
your position, and using examples and evidence to support your claims. We will work on 
refining your ability to convince an audience (whether it be friends, members of your 
community, or coworkers) through written rhetoric. However, unlike that of a football or tennis 
coach, my goal for this class is not to produce �winners� who will always defeat their opponents 
in written or spoken debate; in a democracy, and especially with the contentious issues of our 
times, debates are rarely won outright�and resentment often lingers even if there seems to be a 
clear victor. The guiding philosophy of this class, therefore, stems from a broader definition of 
how argumentation can aid us as engaged members of a social discourse: By subjecting our 
beliefs and opinions to the rigorous standards of written rhetoric, we are forced to find where we 
stand on an issue; in other words, when writing an argumentative paper, we learn how much we 
know about a topic and where our convictions lie. Argumentative writing is both a method of 
convincing others and a process of personal discovery. 

The subject matter for this class (that is, our readings and writing assignments) will focus on 
issues of environment and ecology. I chose to focus on this topic for a few reasons. First, 
because of an expanding human population and diminishing natural resources, environmental 
issues will comprise an ever-increasing share of the public debate; though you will likely take 
specific classes in environment in the future, this class will help you gain an overview of the 
primary topics�you will also be able to focus on one topic in-depth for the semester project. 

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Secondly, the debates over environment and ecology cover a wide range of policy decisions at 
the local, state, national, and global level: you should be able to find an issue to get into no 
matter what your interests. 

Course Goals and Student Learning Objectives 

Building on the college-level proficiencies required in English 1A, students shall achieve the 
ability to write complete essays that demonstrate advanced proficiency in all of the following: 

� Clear and effective communication of meaning. 
� An identifiable focus (argumentative essays will state their thesis clearly and will show 
an awareness, implied or stated, of some opposing point of view). 
� An appropriate voice that demonstrates an awareness of audience and purpose. 
� Careful attention to review and revision. 
� Effective and correct use of supporting materials, including independent research (e.g., 
quoting, paraphrasing, summarizing, and citing sources); 
� Effective analysis, interpretation, evaluation, and synthesis of ideas encountered in 
multiple readings. 
� Effective organization and development of ideas at paragraph and essay levels. 
� Appropriate and effective sentence structure and diction. 
� Command of conventional mechanics (e.g., punctuation, spelling, reference, agreement). 
Student Learning Objectives: 

SLO 1: Students shall write complete essays that demonstrate the ability to refine the 
competencies established in Written Communication 1A. 

SLO 2: Students shall write complete essays that demonstrate the ability to use (locate, analyze, 
and evaluate) supporting materials, including independent library research, and identify key 
concepts and terms that describe the information needed. 

SLO 3: Students shall write complete essays that demonstrate the ability to select efficient and 
effective approaches for accessing information utilizing an appropriate investigative method or 
information retrieval system. 

SLO 4: Students shall write complete essays that demonstrate the ability to synthesize ideas 
encountered in multiple readings. 

SLO 5: Students shall write complete essays that demonstrate the ability to incorporate principles 
of design and communication to construct effective arguments. 

SLO 6: Students shall write complete essays that demonstrate the ability to identify and discuss 
issues related to censorship and freedom of speech. 

Information available online 

You are responsible for reading the following information online at 

http://www.sjsu.edu/english/comp/policyforsyllabi.html 

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� Course guidelines 
� Academic policies (academic integrity, plagiarism, ADA and DRC policies) 
� Adding and dropping classes 
Required Texts 
Textbooks 

Argument as Dialogue (1st ed.) 
Gary Goshgarian and Kathleen Krueger 
ISBN: 9780205019120 

Green (1st ed.) 
Brooke Rollins and Lee Bauknight 
ISBN: 9781598714159 

The Everyday Writer (3rd ed.) 
Andrea A. Lunsford 
ISBN: 9780205019120 

Other Materials 

A spiral-bound, college-ruled notebook 

Other Readings 

Select other readings will be available via the class website (see below for address) 

Library Liaison 

Toby Matoush 
Dr. Martin Luther King Library 
(408)808-2096 
Toby.matoush@sjsu.edu 

Class Protocol 

In-Class Essays 

Over the course of the semester, you will write four timed in-class essays. The first will be an 
ungraded diagnostic essay; the fourth will be an ungraded practice final. Not completing either 
of the ungraded in-class essays will, however, negatively affect the final grades you receive for 
your other in class essays. For each essay, I will give you one hour to respond to a pair of 
passages using personal and outside examples. Your writing should demonstrate a singular 
argument and focus, as well as a clear structure that divides examples, sub points, counterpoints, 
an introduction, and a conclusion. We will go over effective strategies for generating ideas in a 
timed essay. 

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Out-of-Class Essays 
All assignments written outside of class will be submitted via electronic copy to turnitin.com 
instead of being turned in during class. You must submit your paper before 11:59PM on the 
listed due date. In order to submit papers to the class account, you will need the class ID, which 
is 4145896. 

Peer Reviews 

In order to help you assess the strengths and weaknesses in both your writing and your peers' 
writing, we will conduct three peer reviews. I will place you into groups of three. You will 
submit a copy of your rough draft to each group member, as well as to the instructor. I will give 
you a guideline for the peer-review day: a series of questions you will need to answer in short 
paragraphs. You will spend the class period in your groups discussing the strengths and 
weaknesses in your peers' writing. Make sure to put your name on your responses. 

Late Papers 

All due dates are final for both rough and final drafts, unless I announce an extension. I will 
allow extensions for students in extreme circumstances, provided I receive sufficient evidence 

(e.g. doctor's note). Come talk to me in person as soon as possible if you don't think you'll 
complete an assignment by the required date. Any late assignment without sufficient explanation 
will be deducted one full grade for every weekday (not class day) it is late. For the peer-review 
process, it is your responsibility to give your group members sufficient time to review your 
paper. 
Grade Challenges 

If you believe a grade you receive on any assignment is unfair, you are welcome to challenge the 
grade by the following process. Referring to the course learning objectives and the assignment 
sheet, argue in writing why you think your grade was undeserved and suggest what grade you 
think you deserve. For the longer papers, this rationale should be no less than 2 pages, though it 
may be as short as one page for smaller assignments. I reserve the right to not change the grade, 
or to not raise it as high as suggested, according to how well I believe you argued your case. 

Attendance 

I cannot force you to come to class, but missing class means (on most days) not completing a 
journal entry, which cannot be made up; therefore, the grade you get for your journal will reflect 
your attendance and participation. 

Laptops 

You may use a laptop to view a reading given on the course website. Any other use during class 
(web, Facebook, games) is not permissible. 

Ground Rules for Writing and Class Discussion 

Academic discourse is founded on principles of honesty and free thought; however, some lines 
should not be crossed in any public forum. I will not tolerate personal attacks upon other 
students or instructors, nor will I tolerate attacks upon another's race, ethnicity, religion, sex, or 
sexual orientation. I will eject from the class any student who I believe is offending other 
students or disrupting the class. I will also give no credit to any writing assignment (including 
entries in the writing journal) containing such offensive material. 

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Academic policies 

You are responsible for reading the SJSU academic polices available online: 
http://www.sjsu.edu/english/comp/policyforsyllabi.html 

Assignments 

Grading: A-F. 

10% � In-Class Essays: 2,000 words (SLO 1, 3, 4, 5) 
10% � Writing Analysis: 900 words (SLO 1, 3, 4, 5) 
10% � Research Synthesis: 1,200 words (SLO 1, 2, 3, 5, 6) 
10% � Annotated Bibliography: 1,200 words (SLO 1, 2, 3) 
15% � Proposal Essay: 1,500 words (SLO 1, 2, 3, 5) 
10% � Peer Reviews: 1,200 words (SLO 1, 5) 
15% � Writing Journal (SLO 1, 4, 6) 
20% � University-Wide English 1B Exam 

SJSU Writing Center 

The SJSU Writing Center is located in Room 126 in Clark Hall. It is staffed by professional 
instructors and upper-division or graduate-level writing specialists from each of the seven SJSU 
colleges. Our writing specialists have met a rigorous GPA requirement, and they are well trained 
to assist all students at all levels within all disciplines to become better writers. The Writing 
Center website is located at http://www.sjsu.edu/writingcenter/about/staff/. 

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English 1B, Fall 2011, Course Schedule 


Week Date AD=Argument as Dialogue G=Green W=Class Website 
1 
Thurs 8/25 Introductions 
2 
Tues 8/30 
Thurs 9/1 
UNIT I: Critical Reading and the Basics of Argument 
Diagnostic Writing Exam 
Read (AD)1-10 and (G)Alan Weisman, �Earth without People�; Blank 
Writing Journals Due 
3 Tues 9/6 
Thurs 9/8 
Read (AD)25-26 and (G)Janisse Ray, �Ecology of a Cracker Childhood� 
Read (AD)32-38 and (G)Eco America, �Climate and Ecology Truths: Our 
Common Future� 
4 Tues 9/13 
Thurs 9/15 
Read (AD)180-184 and (W)Verlyn Klinkenborg, �Our Vanishing Night� 
Read (AD)113-116 and (G)Mike Tidwell, �To Really Save the Planet, Stop 
Going Green� 
5 Tues 9/20 
Thurs 9/22 
Writing Analysis due, read (AD)125-129 
In-Class Essay #1 
6 
Tues 9/27 
Thurs 9/29 
UNIT II: Using Evidence in Argumentation 
Read (AD)155-163 and (G)Stewart Brand, �Reframing the Problems� 
Read (AD)165-167 and (G)Colin Beavan, �Life after the Year without 
Toilet Paper� 
7 Tues 10/4 
Thurs 10/6 
Read (AD)170-173 and (W)Michael Pollan, �What's Eating America� 
Research Synthesis Draft Due, read (AD)S. Fred Singer, �The Great 
Global Warming Swindle,� 168-170 
8 Tues 10/11 
Thus 10/13 
Peer Comments Due and Discussion Day 
Read (G)Annie Marie Todd, �Prime-Time Subversion: The Environmental 
Rhetoric of the Simpsons� (excerpt 140-152) 
9 Tues 10/18 
Thurs 10/20 
Final Draft Due, read (W) Ben McGrath �Holy Rollers� 
In-Class Essay #2 
10 
Tues 10/25 
Thurs 10/27 
UNIT III: Proposal Writing 
Read (AD)243-248 and (G)Bruce Wilson, �Sounding the Alarm� 
Read (AD)249-253 and (G)Rachel Carson, �The Obligation to Endure� 
11 Tues 11/1 
Thurs 11/3 
Read (AD)254-261 and (G)Derick Jensen and Stephanie McMillan, �As the 
World Burns: 50 Simple Things you Can Do to Stay in Denial� 
Read (G) Kevin Bullis, �The Geoengineering Gambit� 
12 Tues 11/8 
Thurs 11/10 
Read (G) Edward Wilson, �For the Love of Life� 
Annotated Bibliography Due, read (G)Shannon Hayes, �Meet the Radical 
Homemakers� 
13 Tues 11/15 
Thurs 11/17 
Read (AD)134-136 and (G)Naomi Klein, �A Hole in the World� 
Read (AD)79-80 and (G)Courtney Martin, �The Population Debate...� 

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Week Date AD=Argument as Dialogue G=Green W=Class Website 
14 Tues 11/22 
Thurs 11/24 
Read (AD)86-90 
Thanksgiving � No Class 
15 Tues 11/29 
Thurs 12/1 
Practice Final (In-Class Essay) 
Proposal Draft Due, Final Essay Strategies 
16 Tues 12/6 
Thus 12/8 
Peer Comments Due and Discussion Day 
Final Draft Due 
Final 
Exam 
Saturday, 
December 3 
8:00am � 10:00am 
Location and other specifics will be announced in class. 

Important SJSU dates Fall 2011 

Monday 
Mon-Tues 

Wednesday 
Monday 
Tuesday 

Tuesday 
Wednesday 
Friday 
Wednesday 
Thursday 
Friday 
Thursday 
Friday 
Mon-Fri 
Monday 
Tuesday 
Wednesday 

Monday 

August 22 Academic Year Begins � Fall Semester Begins 
August 22-23 Pre-Instruction Activities: Orientation, Advisement, 
Faculty Meetings and Conferences (P) 
August 24 First Day of Instruction � Classes Begin 
September 5 Labor Day -Campus Closed (L) 
September 6 Last Day to Drop Courses Without an Entry on 
Student�s Permanent Record (D) 
September 13 Last Day to Add Courses & Register Late (A) 
September 21 Enrollment Census Date (CD) 
November 11 Veteran�s Day -Campus Closed (V) 
November 23 Classes that start at 5:00 PM or later will not meet 
November 24 Thanksgiving Holiday -Campus Closed (T) 
November 25 Rescheduled Holiday -Campus Closed (RH) 
December 8 Last Day of Instruction -Last Day of Classes 
December 9 Study/Conference Day (no classes or exams) (SC) 
December 12-16 Final Examinations (exams) 
December 19 Final Examinations Make-Up Day (MU) 
December 20 Grade Evaluation Day (E) 
December 21 Grades Due From Faculty -End of Fall Semester 


(G) 
December 26 Christmas Holiday Observed -Campus Closed 
(CH) 
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